Write an essay discussing the advantages and disadvantages of working out at a gym. When you’re writing an essay discussing advantages and disadvantages, organise your ideas according to the plan below. Write in a formal style. Do not use short forms or abbreviations.

INTRODUCTION

Introduce the subject of the essay and both sides of the topic.

MAIN PART (2 PARAGRAPHS)

Present the advantages in one paragraph and the disadvantages in another paragraph. Cover both sides of the topic equally. Use linking words/phrases:

To list points: firstly, first of all, to begin with, secondly, also, in addition, what is more, finally,

lastly, etc.

To express contrast: however, on the one hand, on the other hand, etc.

CONCLUSION

Make a general statement. Use phrases like:

In conclusion,...

To sum up,...

State your opinion if you want to. Use phrases like:

In my opinion,...

Personally, I believe...

I (definitely) think...

In my view,...

Use the table to organise your ideas:

Advantages Disadvantages

• get professional help by an instructor

• have available equipment

• can exercise regardless of the weather conditions • can be boring after a short while

• it costs
• can be crowded
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