Сочинение по языку на тему "моя любимая еда" уровень 3 класс, текст из пяти предложений

Everybody has their favorite food. Somebody likes pizza, cakes or something like salad. My favorite food is ice cream. It's tasty and very sweet, it has a lot of flavor: chocolate, vanilla and etc. And you can eat it everywhere: in the park, mall and it is very important for us in summer, when it's very hot:)

Мб там 3 ошибки, но вроде бы норм(: