Проверьте грамматику, ! she was sixteen years old, after she ran away from the foster family. jasmine wanted to live alone. she got on a train to london, thinking that there will be easier to survive. jasmine was slept in cheap hotels for a few nights, but then she money ran out of, and she spent her first night on the bench. she spent some nights in a hostel for the homeless and often abandoned places. she shared a room with fifteen people, and usually the room's filthy and no running water or electricity. but at least it's a roof over your head, when there are sub-zero temperatures outside. the government gave her money, but that was just enough to eat. jasmine was selling magazines "the big issue" that's all she could really. homelessness is a vicious circle that is very difficult to break out of. it's very hard to get work, because no one takes you seriously. she would like to get my own place which they can call home. in our time, on the streets, you can see a lot of homeless people. these people are very unhappy. they haven't got home and family, nice and warm clothes and food. i think that these people need help. all people need a comfortable home, warm clothes and food tasty.

She was sixteen years old when she ran away from the foster family. Jasmine wanted to live on her own. She caught a train to London, thinking that it would be easier for her to survive there.
Jasmine spent several nights in cheap hotels, but then when she had run out of money, she spent her first night on a bench.
After that she spent some nights in a hostel for the homeless and and sometimes in abandoned houses.
She used to share a single room with fifteen people, and the room were usually filthy with no running water or electricity.
But at least she had a roof over her head in times when there were sub-zero temperatures outdoors.
The government gave her money, but that was just enough to eat.
Jasmine sold "The Big Issue" magazines ... that was all she could really do.
Homelessness is a vicious circle that is very difficult to break out of.
It's very hard to get work, because no one takes you seriously.
She would like to get a place which she could call her home.
In our time, you can see a lot of homeless people in the streets.
These people are very unhappy. They have neither home nor family, they have no nice warm clothes or enough food. I think that these people need help.
All people need a comfortable home, warm clothes and enough food.