Правильно вставить артикли, ! after month of travelling in new zeland, money was starting to run out. we needed to find jobs which also provided place to stay - tent we normally used now had small holes and no longer kept out rain. fruit picking was posibility. right near sea in tauranga, there were vacancies for picking kiwis. apparently, pay was ok, and you could sleep in dormitories for free. we had just enough money to get there.

After a month of travelling in New Zealand, money was starting to run out. We needed to find jobs which also provided  a place to stay – A tent we normally used now had small holes and no longer kept out the rain. Fruit picking was a possibility. Right near the sea in Tauranga, there were vacancies for picking kiwis. Apparently, a pay was OK, and you could sleep in dormitories for free. We had just enough money to get there.
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