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Dear Ashley,Thank you for your letter. It was great to hear about your new house.
As for my new school it's very big! It has three computer rooms and wonderful sport facilities. Actually, it seems a nice place and I enjoy studying there. The kids in my class are very friendly.I've already made some new friends and often meet after classes.
I've got only one new subject this year. It's Economics and I'm beginning to think that it's not difficult, after all!By the way, what music styles do you enjoy? Have you got any favorite bands? Would you like to go to their concert? As for me, I prefer The Beatles. They are cool!
I'd better go now.Lots of love,Samantha

Hello, Jim. 
Sorry, I didn't write you earlier. I was really busy. I took a part time job during this summer. I worked as a delivery person. This was a very interesting work - I could meet new people, when delivering mail to them. My hobby is riding a bike. It was very conviniet to deliver mail by bike. So this work was both for fun and for earning money. When September started I went back to school. During my winter holidays I am planning to take some part time job again. I am saving some money for summer. Next summer I want to go to London to practice my English. I don't want to take any money from my parents. 
And what are your plans for summer? Are you planning to work or to travel??
Hope to hear from you soon. Sincerely yours. Valya.