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"ваше имя" I am extraordinary young man.I have my own company, Super jam, which I started when I was just 16.I earn more money than my parents.My company makes jam-500,000 jars every year-using the secret recipe from my grandmother.I sell my products to all supermarkets.The business is growing fast-four favourite at the moment,but, more the way.And i have charity that organizes huge tea parties for old people with the music and dancing.

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