Last summer, six months after the wedding, jill bought a land-rover and she had a two weeks holiday in mexico with her friend annie. they travelled by all over the country, camping by the roadside. one night they became frightened. they told that it was silly, but they kept hearing a noise. after that they stayed in hotels. jill's husband was very pleased when she got home. he hadn't enjoyed at all

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Last summer, six months after the wedding, Jill bought herself a land-rover and she had a two weeks holiday in Mexico with her friend Annie. They travelled by it all over the country, camping by the roadside. One night they became frightened. They told themselves that it was silly, but they kept hearing a noise. After that they stayed in hotels. Jill's husband was very pleased when she got home. He hadn't enjoyed himself at all without her.