Какие здесь есть ошибки? и какие сюда можно добавить четыре предложения? in my free time i prefer reading books and watching movies. therefore my favourite film is "the hobbit". this film was shooted by peter jackdon. peter made it according to the book "the hobbit or there and back again". this film is about one usual hobbit who liked to stay at home. however, thirst for adventures made him to be brave and help his friends. one day a group of gnomes asked the main hero to help them to save their kingdom in the mountain, because hobbits were famous as the most quit and most slick in the world. firstly, the hobbit did not want to help them because he was a coward and did not like leave his cosy house, but then he changed his mind and went hiking with gnomes. i like this film because it is very interesting and breathtaken. i can watch it again and again.

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Sova551 Sova551  02.10.2020 04:49
Ошибок много, но я напишу тебе готовый вариант.

In my free time I prefer reading books and watching movies. My favourite film is "The Hobbit". This one was shot by Peter Jackdon. Peter made it in accordance with the book "The Hobbit or There and Back Again". This film is about an usual Hobbit who liked staying at home. However, thirst for adventures made him brave and helpful for his friends. 
One day a group of gnomes asked the main character to help them to save their kingdom in the mountain, because hobbits were famous as the most quit and most slick in the world. Firstly, the Hobbit did not want to help them because he was a coward and did not like leave his cosy house, but then he changed his mind and went hiking with gnomes.
I like this film because it is very interesting and breathtaken. I can watch it for so many times. To be hornest, 'The Hobbit' has changed my view on all kind of movies as I find this one the best. But to my regret, it's underrated a little bit so none of my friends knows about it. And some times it is kind of difficult to state you find a movie no one knows the best. But I am still going to recommend to anyone to watch it.
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