Изменить 6 слов на метафоры в данном тексте This is a good piece of writing that establishes an atmosphere of discomfort before shifting to one of anxiety and then panic. A range of sentence structures are used effectively to highlight different details. There is some good use of vocabulary, although word choices could be more original and sophisticated in places. There are some interesting similes and personification, but more variety could be achieved through metaphor. Opening and closing sentences are good at grabbing the reader's attention.