Исправить грамматические ошибки, вообще подправить на лад, времена подправить. в общем полностью проверить текст(10класс, вообще не знаю) it was supposed to be the most ordinary saturday night. i was alone since my parents left for my sister's birthday. suddenly someone knocked on the door. i was surprised, because i didn't expect anyone. approaching the door, i asked: "who? " , the instant answer: "delivery" . i opened and gave me bag from the kfs. i didn't understand who made the order and paid for it. after 10 minutes again knocked on the door. there, i heard already my dear person. opening the door, i saw a large bouquet of red roses, with one white rose in the middle. also in his hands was a bag from the macdonalds. he decided to make me a surprise. in the end, we had a fun evening watching the movie and had eating fast food.