Hi Dylan,
You won't believe what happened to me while I was on holiday in ...(place).. (who) went there (time)... by (how)The weather wasWe stayed Every day we Then one day I felt In the end We all felt
What about you?
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(your fist name)

HI Dylan, You won't believe what happened to me while I was on holiday in London.  Kate and Sophy went there in June by plane very unexpected. The weather was fine. We stayed here for two monthes. Every day we walk, saw different sights and went to the cinema or theatre. Then one day we went to London's Eye. I felt great gladness when Sophy sat down near to me. In the end of our walk around the park Kate said that Sophy and I looked like felling in love. We all felt embarrassment. What about you? Write back, David.