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i would like to tell you about summer vacation of my classmate-daniel . he was at the camping facility. it lasted 10 hours. the weather was sunny and hot. he ate pizza and fry potatoes . the food was delicious and great . daniel made 5 new friends . he played with them a lot. daniel spent few money , because he bought only food . on the beach he swam , ran , built sand many other things . daniel traveled with his family 6 hours . in a word he had a great time)

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