Ещё раз проверьте текст на правильность Yesterday I got up at 9:00. I took a shower, brushed my teeth, and had breakfast. Then I decided to study biology and German, this is my favorite subject. I studied for 2 hours. After lunch, I went to volleyball practice. I go in for sports 3 times a week. On the way home, I decided to take a walk in the park. After the walk I played with our puppy, his name is Hoddy. Very funny kid. Then I took a shower and had dinner. Delicious croissants with cheese were waiting for me for dinner. After dinner, I decided to watch my favorite movie. At 23.00 I went to bed, I have a regime.​

Yesterday I got up at 9:00. I took a shower, brushed my teeth, and had (a) breakfast. Then I decided to study Biology and German, this (are) my favorite subjects. I studied for 2 hours. After lunch, I went to volleyball practice. I go in for sports 3 times a week. On the way home, I decided to take a walk in the park. After the walk I played with our puppy, its name is Hoddy. Very funny kid. Then I took a shower and had dinner. Delicious croissants with cheese were waiting for me for dinner. After dinner, I decided to watch my favorite movie. At 23.00 I went to bed, I have a regime.​

Впринципе всё правильно, но есть несколько ошибок я их выделил в скобочках и одну ошибку я исправил