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The last summer was incredible and the best time of summer was the time where i was in the camp. I was there with my friend and also there were a lot of nice people. We had a lot of fun time together.
The most memorable part was the last night. We all went to the beach at night. The weather was amazing, the water was very warm, but we couldn't swim. The boy made a fire. Everyone started to roast potatoes and marshmallows. We sat by the fire singing songs, joking and it was unforgettable.
We saw a bright orange dawn. It was a very beautiful view. We started gathering when suddenly someone noticed the dolphins. Everyone was pleasantly surprised. We spent an unforgettable time watching this beautiful view