Write it in a different way. 1)learn an english song , please. cold you learn an english song ? 2) spend more time with your granny , please. 3)keep to a healthy diet , please. 4)thing about your furure career,please. 5) look after the cdt well.please. 6)fly to canadaon sunday,please. 7)choose a present for your brother, please . 8)put the new blouse on ,please. 9)go to the gym every week,pleaces. 10)take the dog out,pleaces . 11) drink more water ,pleaces . умоляю

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2) Spend more time with your granny, please.
Please, can you spend more time with your granny?

3) Keep to a healthy diet, please. 
Could you keep to a healthy diet, please?

4) Think about your future career, please.
Can you think about your future career, please?

5) Look after the cdt well, please. (Что такое "cdt", я не понял)
Could you look after the cdt well, please?

6) Fly to Canada on Sunday, please.
Can you fly to Canada on Sunday, please?

7) Choose a present for your brother, please.
Please, can you choose a present for your brother?

8) Put the new blouse on, please.
Could you put the new blouse on, please?

9) Go to the gym every week, please.
Please, can you go to the gym every week?

10) Take the dog out, please.
Could you take the doh out, please?

11) Drink more water, please.
Can you drink more water, please?