Which sentence is off topic and should be taken out of the fourth paragraph?

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(1) I am a fifth-grade student at East Bakerley Middle School. (2) I own a three-year-old Labrador named Susie, and often exercise her on Upton’s Field. (3) I was very upset to read your editorial about dogs and that well-loved piece of land (“Let’s Keep Roaming Dogs Out of Upton’s Field,” April 8).
(4) You state that dogs have become a pest on Upton’s Field. (5) You also state that Upton’s Field is a park, and that people should stick to the rules. (6) You seem to think that one of those rules is that dogs should be kept on a leash.
(7) I take good care of Susie. (8) She loves Upton’s Field and does not bother anyone. (9) Maybe some dogs are pests, like you say. (10) Must all dogs and dog-owners suffer because a few people can’t keep control of their pets?
(11) Dogs have been running free on Upton’s Field for nearly 100 years. (12) It is traditional. (13) In 1912, a farmer named Elias Upton gave the land to the people of our town. (14) In his will, he stated that the citizens of Bakerley should always be allowed to graze animals on it and use it for recreation. (15) Mr. Upton was ninety-eight when he died.
(16) Upton’s Field is not a park. (17) Elias Upton did not say anything about keeping dogs on leashes, and lots of people see letting their dogs go for a run as good recreation. (18) I think Mr. Upton would have felt the same way.
Louise Thompson
Bakerley, CA

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