Сочинение в past perfect и past simple 7 класс(любая тема)

Once upon a time in a magic world there lived a little girl. Her name was Sara.
She loved nature and animals.
And one day she went for a walk in the forest.
There she met a friendly fox. It's name was Foxy. He asked her if she wanted to visit with him a world with different animals. Sara was extremely happy to hear that, so she agreed.
And in that world Sara became a princess and she felt very good so she stayed here for the rest of her life.
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