Проверьте, , текст на содержание ошибок. i would like to be a surgeon. this is very impotant job. surgeons should be an accurate, relaiable and well educated. also the should have ability to make desisions quickly. however, all people need surgeons sometimes. i will never be a hairdresser. this is not my job. this job is not exiting. and hairdressers is not impotant for people as a surgeons. so i prefer to be a surgeon.

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arrow34 arrow34  21.07.2020 13:16
Напише лучше не "this is not my job" а "this job is not for me" и небольшая ошибочка "and hairdressers are not so important for people as a surgeons. That's why I prefer to be a surgeon more than to be a hairdresser"
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