Проверьте, , мини-сочинение про работу родителей на ошибки . my mother has a full-time job as a cook. she has to wear a uniform at work: a white coat and apron. she has weekly shift, but sometimes she works overtime. sometimes, my mother has too many orders. but even so, she manages to deadline. when i asked my mother would she like to work in another place, for example desk job, she answers no. mom said she loves her job, especially bake sweets. so at home i always plenty of goodies.

Отличное сочинение! Но есть некоторые недочеты. Я бы сказала так :
When I ASK my mother would she like to work in another place, for example desk job, she answers no. (либо when i askEDshe answerED)
Mom said she loves her job, especially bake sweets. В этом предложении тоже надо выбрать одно время, я бы сказала так: Mom SAYS, she loves her job, especially TO bake sweets
И последнее - So at home I always plenty of goodies. Тут пропущен глагол, я бы сказала так: So at home I always HAVE plenty of goodies.