проверить грамматику в кратком рассказе о любимом книжном персонаже. my favourite book characters is the edmond dantes. from the book the count of monte cristo. his appearance: he was a heavy-built body, he had blond hair and a round face. features of character: he has a very strong and persistent character. special about edmond dantes: his desire for freedom helped him to survive and win the enemies.

He HAS a heavy-built body, he has blond hair and a round face.
Там кроме этой ошибки ничего нету.

My favourite book character is Edmond Dantes.
He is a main character of the book The Count of Monte Cristo.
His appearance:He has a heavy-built body, he has blond hair and a round face.
Features of character:He has a very strong and persistent character.
Edmond Dantes's features:His desire for freedom helped him to survive and win the enemies