Перевидите на . мой день. в 7 30 я встаю.в 7 35 я чищу зубы мою руки и лицо.в 7 40 я завтракаю.в 8 00 я иду в школу.в 13 30 я .в 15 00 я иду гулять.в 18 00 я делаю уроки.в 21 00 я смотрю телевизор.в 23 00 я иду спать. время замените словами ну там 7: 00-фети севан(вроде) заранее.

Вот: (только тут я заменила 15:00, на 3 часа дня, это одно и то же) 
At seven thirty minutes I vstayu.V seven o'clock and thirty-five minutes, I brush my teeth, wash my hands and litso.V seven o'clock forty minutes I zavtrakayu.V eight o'clock I go to school. In thirteen hours and thirty minutes, I obedayu.V three in the afternoon I go for a walk. In eighteen hours I do uroki.V twenty-one hours, I watch TV. At twenty-three hours, I'm going to bed.

My day.
 At seven-thirty rise. At seven thirty-five, I brust my teeth, wash my hands and face. At seven forty - breakfast. At eight in the morning I go to school. At thirteen thirty I dine. At three pm I go for a walk. At six in the evening I do my homework. At nine in the evening I watch TV. In eleven on the night I go to sleep