Нужно. нужно исправить ошибки в тексте: i live in russia, we for each new year put a fur-tree and we decorate its different toys. we are going to give to everyone gifts. at us always before a holiday in some hours visitors sit down a table and eat. we always give gifts to relatives and friends under eve of new year. my favourite part of a holiday are gifts!
Странный текст, как будто с эл. переводчика! Наверное будет лучше так! Удачи