Не was satting inside the bar for about half an hour when he found that a little girl was standing alongside him. «do you know that children under the age of sixteen don't allow to be here? do you see the notice on the door? » the girl shaked her head. he thought that the assistant asked her to leave the place. instead, in a more kindly tone he said: «is there anyone you looking for here? if you stay outside for a while, i'll give you a lift home». he didn't know why he made that offer. вот так правильно, писала по первому комменту, учитель проверил некоторые предложения не правильные.

  не was sitting inside the bar for about half an hour when he found that a little girl was standing  alongside him. «do you know that children under the age of sixteen don't allow to be here? did you see the notice on the door? » the girl shaked her head. he thought that the assistant  would ask her to leave the place. instead, in a more kindly tone he said: «is here anyone you looking for? if you stay outside for a while, i'll give you a lift home». he didn't know why he made that offer.