Найдите 8 ошибок in my last job i worked for a large telecommunications company. it used to be the estate-owned monopoly, but they privatized it in the nineties. unfortunately, the cultural there hasn’t really changed. decision-making is very slow-moving and bureaucracy – everything has to be agreed all the way up the chain before action can be taken. i didn’t really like working there, and i moved to a smaller competitor two years ago. it’s much better now – i have more responsible because my boss trusts me and he relegates a lot of interesting projects to me. everybody knows what is going on and can make a contribution – communication works well in both directions, both bottom-down and top-up. it’s a dynamic, innovation company and we’re growing fast. i hope to continue working here for several more years.

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Nik228tyto4ki Nik228tyto4ki  05.01.2024 19:06
На первый взгляд, текст выглядит практически безошибочно. Однако, я нашел несколько мелких ошибок и предложений, которые можно улучшить для лучшего понимания содержания. Вот они:

1. "in my last job i worked for" - правильно "In my last job, I worked for".

2. "it used to be the estate-owned monopoly" - лучше "It used to be a state-owned monopoly".

3. "but they privatized it in the nineties" - лучше "but it was privatized in the nineties".

4. "the cultural there hasn’t really changed" - лучше "the culture there hasn't really changed".

5. "decision-making is very slow-moving" - лучше "the decision-making process is very slow".

6. "bureaucracy – everything has to be agreed all the way up the chain before action can be taken" - лучше "bureaucracy - everything has to go through multiple levels of approval before any action can be taken".

7. "and i moved to a smaller competitor two years ago" - лучше "and I moved to a smaller competitor company two years ago".

8. "it’s much better now" - лучше "it’s much better now."

9. "i have more responsible because my boss trusts me" - лучше "I am given more responsibility because my boss trusts me".

10. "and he relegates a lot of interesting projects to me" - лучше "and he assigns a lot of interesting projects to me".

11. "everybody knows what is going on" - лучше "everyone knows what is going on".

12. "and can make a contribution – communication works well in both directions, both bottom-down and top-up" - лучше "and can contribute - communication works well in both directions, from top to bottom and from bottom to top".

13. "it’s a dynamic, innovation company" - лучше "it’s a dynamic, innovative company".

14. "i hope to continue working here for several more years" - лучше "I hope to continue working here for several more years".

Надеюсь, что это поможет вам лучше понять текст и изучить правильное использование грамматики и фразовых оборотов. Если у вас возникнут дополнительные вопросы, не стесняйтесь задавать.
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