Написал сочинение по . проверьте и исправьте. мне сказали тип времена не правильно стоят. ну и много в общем ошибок. classmates, we agreed to go to the theatre. this was my first visit to the theatre. had to go away, so i left early in the morning. on the way i thought looks like the theater building , what he is inside. when we were at the threshold of the theater, i saw that he was much prettier than i had imagined. then we went inside, inside he was just amazing, the interior struck me. after some time the show started. they put me in a joyful mood , i am so involved in the action that i forget that i am watching a play. this view teaches us to find your way in life. it performance makes you laugh and happy. after the first trip to the theater i can say that i liked the theatre.

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Matvey0203 Matvey0203  21.08.2020 01:55
we HAVE agreed
! лучше on MY way, а не on THE way
! ...i thought how did the theatre look like and what was it in the inside
! ...IT was much prettier
! лучше напиши IT was amazing there, when we went inside
! the show HAD started
! they HAD put me
! i was so...
! i forgot...
! ...to find your OWN PLACE in life
! itS performance, а вообще лучше THE performance
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MariamAr81849 MariamAr81849  21.08.2020 01:55
Classmates and i agreed to go to theatre. This was my first time visiting theatre. I had to go (время) so i left early in the morning. On the way to the theatre i was wondering how did theatre look like, what was inside of it. When we reached the threshold of the thatre, i realized that it looked prettier. Then we went inside of it, inside of the theatre was so amazing.They put me in a joyful mood, I was invlolved in the action so i forgot that i was watching a play. This view teaches us to find our way in life. The performance made me laugh. After the first visit to the theatre i can say that i like the thatre. 
думаю так будет лучше
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