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Dear Tom
I'm glad that you want to visit Russia . The most popular place in Russia, I think the red area . Sdes must visit any tourist . Red Square is very beautiful. You will not regret that visit her . 
Red Square - the main square in Moscow , located in the center of its radial-circular layout midway between Moscow Kremlin (to the west ) and China Town ( to the east ) . From the square to the Moscow River is receding Vasilevsky descent .
Area lies along the north- eastern wall of the Kremlin, the Kremlin between travel, travel Resurrection Gate , St. Nicholas Street , Ilyinka Varvarka and Vasilevsky descent to the Kremlin embankment . Area facing the street branching further and become the main thoroughfare of the city , leading to different parts of Russia .
On the square are the place of execution , a monument to Minin and Pozharsky , the Lenin Mausoleum , next to which Kremlin Wall Necropolis , where figures are buried (mainly political and military ) of the Soviet state to the west of the square is the Moscow Kremlin , to the east - Top ( GUM ) and the Middle Trading Rows , north - Historical Museum, and Kazan Cathedral, south - Pokrovsky Cathedral (St. Basil ) . Unique architectural ensemble of the square is protected by UNESCO as a World Heritage Site .
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