Ihave a cat. her name is kenny. when i was 10 my mother brought her a kitten. she lives at home with us. she is grey,but there are some white spots. kenny is very fluffy and funny. sometimes she goes out for a walk. kenny likes to eat fish and hates soup and porridge. she likes when i play with her,but she doesn't like when her tease. she lives with us for 2 years and our family likes her with her fun. правильно?
but she doesn't like when I tease her.
She has been living with us for 2 years
with her fun. - звучит чисто по русски, лучше заменить на very much.