I live a large 26 story house. We have a friendly home, many friend, my age. We have neighbor, that scream at night and no sleep. We have another house next door that is built just like ours. My friend live there to. There is a store near my house «SMALL», my dad and I been going to store? Buy for food, for more than 5 years, we have no failed. Also, next to the house is a store? That was built not long ago. We very rarely go to it. Near our house is an old night club that is being converted into a residential complex, and I sometimes went to this club, where there are no people.
В ТЕКСТЕ ЕСТЬ ОШИБКИ, исправить:
1. I live IN
2. many множественное число, значит friend в множ.числе тоже
3. and NO sleep. не правильно, используй вс глагол Present Simple do/does
4. just like our! единственное число
5. my dad and I been going to storу? во поставлен не правильно
6. buy food без for
7. fail не подходит по смыслу в предложении
8. Near our house THERE is
9. I sometimes went to this club, where there are no people — грамматически не правильно составлено предложение
I live in a large 26 storey house. We have a friendly home, many friends who are my age. We have a neighbor, that screams at night and doesn't sleep. We have another house next door that is built just like our (но по-моему правильней будет ours). My friend lives there. There is a store near my house «SMALL». My dad and I have been going to the store and buying food for more than 5 years. Also, there is a store next to the house that was built not long ago. We go there very rarely. Near our house there is an old night club that is being converted into a residential complex. I sometimes go to this club when there are no people.