Dear dan sorry for not having answered. i was too much busy with school. it is so cool that you can play the guitar.

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Английский язык: Dear dan sorry for not having answered. i was too much busy with school. it is so cool that you can play the guitar. unfortunately i do not know how to play the guitar and i m not in the composition of any rock group. but we have music lessons where we sing songs. i like to sing songs. i adore the songs from the television show glee . in this series, the actors perform well-known songs around the world. did you hear about this show? i think if you like different music, then you should watch it.

mooncat1 · Answer

Мне не понравилось выражение in the composition of any rock group. мне кажется это слово здесь ни к месту, нужно поискать другой синоним.

the actors perform well-known songs around the world - здесь нужно изменить порядок слов the actors performed songs well-known around the world

I adore to rock ( не совсем уверенна на счет to, никогда не встречала этот предлог с этим словом, хотя точно не уверена, оно придает какой-то другой оттенок слову.
Classical music i do not like. правильно i do not like classical music.

singer in rock правильно rock singer

waint - wait

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